Some Screen Shots..

FEEDBACK from other groups

Genre:
supposedly a typical girl pop song, upbeat although shes breaking up the relationship and dating are similar to the pop girl genre.

Relationships: cathedral in background when the organ is playing shows the visual relationship with the music.

Camerawork: spinning shot was good

Editing: good effects go well with pace

Mise-en-scene: coffee shop fits in with the modern sound of the song but extras in the background could of been more carefully thought of

special effects: good transitions.

Comments..

Many people liked our video,
And after seeing all the other videos ours is defintiley like none of the others.
This is good as it shows our originality and that was part of the reason why we chose the song in the first place.
=)

There were parts in the video where we weren't happy with, but no drastic issues.

Final Videoo..

The Final Product..!

Final Feedback from Final Version of Music Video

Our entire media class sat down and we all watched each other's music video a final time..this time in its finished staged...by watching each others we give feedback on other groups performances as well as our own...commenting on the 5 key elements..

1) Generic Conventions..
2) Performance & Mise-en-Scene
3) Lip Syncing
4) Coherant Narrative
5) Editing, Camera Work & FX

Everyone commented on all these aspects on ours...

*saying that our lip synching was really good and the performance worked well with the miming so it worked.
*our narrative wasnt boring and made a lot of sense in relation to the song...
*the camera work was good though in some areas shakey but the spinning around the couple worked in our favour
*coffee stills were good and held a good symbolisis in regards to the couple's relationship..

Final Stages of Editing

We've taken on board the comments that we recieved on our feedback for the roughcut and we hope to apply it into our final editing of the video...We have stripped our video bare and started adding shots again and our main aim for the first part is to align it all up in lip syncing. Afterwards we plan to edit the individual shots and add any necessary transitions of video FX..e.g. colour corrector as suggested by Barney..to make our video much more interesting and take on a more abstract element. Also we are going to add more shots of Megan dancing into areas of the video so as to deter ourselves from making the video too literal...We have very little time and so we are making the most of what we have..all members of the group have booked a late night editing session on a monday...and so we hope to get the majority of the work out the way...

Clocks ticking....